Last night I dreamed a dream of you,
A dream of dread desire,
And in that dream dark passions flowed
Which filled my heart with fire.
You fill my heart with longing,
My eyes with lustful sights,
I want to have and hold you,
Oh curse that fateful night!
This fateful night did stir me,
Did wake the inner beast,
I need to feel your touch now,
Let loving be our feast.
Copyright, 2008, Blake Jolly.
I am happy with the rhyming and the flow, and I like the 12 line, 3 stanza thing. I'm moving on to Pride and Greed now, and I have yet to decide if I should change the style for each poem to reflect the "sin" better... Undecided. Hope you enjoyed.
Happy Valentine's Day (oddly fitting!).
Blake.
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